Yo, fix the name and pronoun thing or take it away completely, you are creating strange expectations.
I like it, it’s more like a random text generator than a branching story.
I once used one called polygen that allows you to create random text starting from formal grammar rules. It’s very flexible, this is some info: http://massimomusante.blogspot.com/2009/10/random-text-generation-with-polygen.html
Unfortunately most of the documentation and the content is in Italian. There may be something similar in English.
so you literally make your own story? This idea is really cool but it took me a bit to figure out what was happening. Could you add a short description of your story somewhere. Also, can you get past “foreplay” in this game?
Is the sentence structure supposed to make sense in the ened?
This is really awesome, maybe it would have been nice not to loop back around to some of the same choices, but it’s still pretty neat. I keep wondering how to get out of just Foreplay mode though…
The design and aesthetic of the site is fantastic, it feels like a parody while still having its own identity.
Regarding the storybuilding aspect, I thought it was novel at first, but it lacked the ‘shock’ factor I thought it would have because it didn’t create cohesive thoughts or sentences. When I first heard your idea, I imagined something close to a Madlibs generator. I don’t know how your current game works, but the combinations of words it creates is a little too incomprehensible in my opinion. Very creative though!
I just noticed the “Status: Foreplay” icon… maybe I’m bad at this? I stopped being able to get options and was still on foreplay…
So without a certain lack of pronouns/words, it doesn’t make much sense, but I’m kind of surprised how these random word choices actually made it into half-sensical phrases.
It give the expectation of eroticism, but the result is really dry and overdone to the point of it being… well.. not that.
Yo, fix the name and pronoun thing or take it away completely, you are creating strange expectations.
I like it, it’s more like a random text generator than a branching story.
I once used one called polygen that allows you to create random text starting from formal grammar rules. It’s very flexible, this is some info:
http://massimomusante.blogspot.com/2009/10/random-text-generation-with-polygen.html
Unfortunately most of the documentation and the content is in Italian. There may be something similar in English.
so you literally make your own story? This idea is really cool but it took me a bit to figure out what was happening. Could you add a short description of your story somewhere. Also, can you get past “foreplay” in this game?
Is the sentence structure supposed to make sense in the ened?
This is really awesome, maybe it would have been nice not to loop back around to some of the same choices, but it’s still pretty neat. I keep wondering how to get out of just Foreplay mode though…
The design and aesthetic of the site is fantastic, it feels like a parody while still having its own identity.
Regarding the storybuilding aspect, I thought it was novel at first, but it lacked the ‘shock’ factor I thought it would have because it didn’t create cohesive thoughts or sentences. When I first heard your idea, I imagined something close to a Madlibs generator. I don’t know how your current game works, but the combinations of words it creates is a little too incomprehensible in my opinion. Very creative though!
I just noticed the “Status: Foreplay” icon… maybe I’m bad at this? I stopped being able to get options and was still on foreplay…
So without a certain lack of pronouns/words, it doesn’t make much sense, but I’m kind of surprised how these random word choices actually made it into half-sensical phrases.
It give the expectation of eroticism, but the result is really dry and overdone to the point of it being… well.. not that.